Reviews for Pain
Ruby Red2 chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
the subject was boreing the wording was pat and it went on way too long
Surfing Dog chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
Beautiful picture you paint with your words is very vivid and gives it a chilling, very pretty effect. I love your word choice. Keep up the good work.
eraced chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
wow! your a good writer. i like this, keep it up.

sweet dreams of dying screams. ~erAced~
xsurfgirl chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
I'm sorry.

*hug*