Reviews for Your Shallow Habits
mizgardenia21 chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
Loves this.
Absolutely beautiful.
mortality.is.overrated chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
wow!did you actually write this? its REALLY good!
ElleAyyeBabii chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
So I've sent this poem to about eight of my friends, and they're absolutely in love with it. It's brilliant and you should continue writing more of them, my friends and I will be looking.
hellohellolove chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
It's great, really gets the point across and I like your choice of words, very descriptive.
Hyperroll chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
beautifully written. so much taint, yet so much hope.
123123123123123po chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
i loved it! so moving
meer chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
beautiful.
angelgrl chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
i love this! love the last part 'ur too old to live like this...but too young to die.' love it!
fluffykitty chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
I like it a lot. Very powerful.
PocoSnow15 chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
Wow! That was absolutely amazing! Your words flow together so nicely...I really loved it!