Reviews for October Twilight
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
Such a vivid last line, I like this a lot. Keep writing.
in a jar pk chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
'quaint.' 'hued.' i love your vocabulary-it's refreshing. ]

the haiku is cute. xx
PocoSnow15 chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
Awesome! Very well done! I absolutely love fall. I'll be thinking of this haiku when I'm starring out the window in math class today!