this is really something.

your characters are solid (surprisingly so for the first chapter) and your plot is intriguing. i look forward to the next chapters.

This was a pretty interesting idea. I've heard of people trying to do something similar but just with Death and no one else like you've included. I have to say Death is pretty interesting and made me laugh when he was giving the finger. The only thing off about it I thought was: it doesn't seem like the Devil would be saying "honey" and all of that. Unless he was being all sarcastic or whatnot. Anyway, nice job on this so far.