Reviews for To Dance or Not to Dance a mouse story
El-Burrito chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
I really like this. Your ideas are pretty original and... adorable. I'd advise getting a beta reader though, as there are a lot of spelling/grammatical errors and your phrasing can be a bit simple.

Instead of using much so often, which sounds a little odd, like, 'much force(d)' I would use a lot of, or something similar.

Your is you're when meaning you are, "Your a thing that someone one owns, your not free"

Scarred should be scared...

There are a lot more throughout. It's very cute and a good idea though, and their names are fantastic!