|Reviews for The Matchmaker|
| Lazerkat chapter 22 . 3/30
Oh my gosh if I got a cat for Christmas I would be like !
| Lazerkat chapter 16 . 3/29
I also like to silently correct people's grammar.
| Be My Valentine chapter 3 . 3/4
I wonder how Emma hadn't been rumbled yet. I mean, she half-heartedly explains how no-one opens 420 in fear of breaking the "magic", but if they did, "the hole was inconspicuous enough." How can a hole that feeds into the locker below, be inconspicuous? From what I understand, notes fall through, so unless someone is blind or in a rush, anyone should be able to see it! Unless the locker's really high, so no-one can really look in...but it states she "rose" after slamming the door shut...so I don't know what to think! I'll just believe the former about everyone not wanting to disrupt the "magic." It'll make my life easier.
I was about to comment on Allan, but you clearly make a point about him being slow to catch on, so I applaud you there. Otherwise, I'd have stormed off in a huff at how unbelievable it all is (joshing.)
I enjoyed Darien's perspective once again, he's clearly egotistical, but I'm interested about Lex's sister, and why Lex got all angry about it, despite hiding it well.
So yeah. I think I'm hooked! :D
| Be My Valentine chapter 2 . 3/4
This chapter was actually good! I don't know why I sound so surprised. Why the hell have I never stuck around before? And then I reached the alternative POV, and I kind of knew. For as long as I can remember, I've been running away from alternative POV's in literature because I've been badly scarred in the past. Many people repeat the same situation twice, and the characters just blend into each other and reveal nothing new and it just KILLS me.
But I overrode my knee-jerk reaction and you know what?
Emma is cool.
And this Darien is an interesting character. He clearly likes picking up new totty, but is slipping in a secret request to the matchmaker. What's that all about?
Excited to read the next chapter!
| Be My Valentine chapter 1 . 3/4
I have seen this story many, many times before, clicked on it equally as much, but I don't remember getting far each time. Whether it was because I was distracted by outside life, or I grew bored (which must be impossibly, surely?), I don't know.
But I will make a concious effort to check in every now and then this time, about what I find great, so I can actually chronicle what I've read and not read!
The prologue is halfway decent and I smell something good here! Here goes.
| Muribr chapter 39 . 1/6
First story I read in this site, and can't stress enough at how pumped I am!
Emma and Darien intrigued me to the very end, and when I catch myself skipping some parts to read dialogues, it just goes to show the story is great!
Thank you for sharing it with me, and know The Matchmaker will always be one of the ghosts I remember.
Best of wishes to Ellie with her new job!
| Kalift chapter 2 . 1/3
One of the best I've read on this site.
| Bluebottles chapter 38 . 12/16/2014
Amazing, beginning to end. I am not that into high school romances. But this ruled! Especially the prologue and epilogue.
| Xx.WildAtHeart.xX chapter 39 . 12/16/2014
Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. No words. I. Loved. It. The epilogue. Whoa. The entire story from beginning to end.. Magic.
| Amy Pond chapter 38 . 12/7/2014
Oh my god this story was amazing! Best way I could have chosen to spend my Sunday I think! :)
I feel like this story is gonna be one of those that sticks with me for a while! Thank you so much (I don't know why I'm thanking you because you didn't write it for me but oh well) for this story it was amazing and I wish I could go and reread it again without knowing what to expect!
Best way to keep myself occupied and away from my responsibilities xD
| Amy Pond chapter 5 . 12/7/2014
I know this is a kinda old story, but I hope you'll still see this comment! :D
I am really enjoying this story! This chapter reminded me of something that happened in my own math class! Darien said he didn't notice Emma in that class before? That happened to me one xD That was hilarious actually!
Anyway, that makes me like the story even more! Not to mention that it's written VERY well and that it's already complete so I can just binge read it :)
It's awesome so far, though, so I'm going to continue! :D
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/8/2014
Wayyy to many, like, likes in that chapter. You need to chill it with the stereotypes.
| TooLazyToLogin chapter 39 . 9/18/2014
lol all jokes aside, u shud really begin the sequel already, its been too long. the ending satisfied the story, but not the readers completely. i cant believe Darien and Emma were just a casual, high school thing and will go on to live their lives separately, marrying others. no, we definitely need a sequel
| Kris anita chapter 39 . 8/24/2014
The story was beautiful,.. I enjoyed emma's persona,thought 13 my be quite young to fully construct an approach on life,i enjoyed he smtyms impassiveness,disinterest,and perceptiveness,darien was totally a cute puppy with her,and the climax when they fought made him a deeper person,but waiting for her to apologize jst showed hw immature,oh i loved allan to bits and candy also,i dont stil understand why dariens mother had to act like a total biatch for so long,and thougsh the story was in darien and em's pov,i lovd troy and would hav loved mre from him,like getting that girl he liked finally
| GinzzzRoxxx chapter 27 . 8/9/2014
Haha he had to be called Alfred, of course. There's just no other way to be when you're the butler of a handsome, brooding, wealthy, young bachelor...