Reviews for The Matchmaker
Laenaya chapter 39 . 7/10/2013
This was absolutely amazing! It was definitely the best story to read first on fictionpress!
Aspired Writer chapter 5 . 7/8/2013
This is really good. xD
Jae Shin chapter 38 . 7/2/2013
standing ovation
The last paragraph was... phenomenal.
You are a truly gifted writer, with a knack for describing scenarios and emotions just so that we readers can actually see and feel the things that the characters do.
Amazing.
Keep on writing, dear author.
God bless you!

Hang in there and happy writing,
- Jae Shin -
AnaGirl chapter 38 . 7/1/2013
I don't know where to start.
(Well, excuses are in order) I actually read this story about a week ago.
My schedule:
3pm - find story
read
11pm - go to bed
sleep
7am - wake up and run to computer
7:05 to 9am - read

So, after that, I needed some time away from the computer.

Thoughts:
Saying that you have a great style of writing doesn't do you justice. It isn't style that drew me in. It was the dialogue.
The vocabulary is really diverse, and the fact that it was kept up throughout the entirety of the story makes it seem natural, as opposed to forced.
As well as that, the banter between Darien and Emma was so witty and intelligent. It wasn't flat, or cliche, and it didn't continue to use the same old "You're a jerk." "Well, duh. Does it seem like I care." If you said this in the story, it was followed up by something so awesome, that I didn't even notice.

I'm not often fond of romance stories, and thought I'd be somewhat disappointed, particularly if the story went offtrack and didn't focus on the stated plotline. Again, however, the writing, and vocabulary, kept me drawn in.

One more thing to say ('cause my dinner's paging me), the development of the Emma and Darien's romance was great, and I was particularly pleased at how they "realized their romantic feelings". Once again, you didn't approach the subject with cliche (well, maybe a little), and the feelings were realistic.

(Aaagh, I have to say one more thing before I go!)
This is constructive criticism, really, and not so much praise... sorry!
Darien and Emma were fantastic characters, developed quite superbly, but the other characters seemed to fall a little flat.
While I do understand that he was not necessarily a huge part of the story, I think it would have been beneficial if you had focused a little bit more on Brock.

OH, I really have to go now! Thank you so much for such an amazing, beautiful story!

-AnaGirl
fan chapter 2 . 6/22/2013
i dont know if you've read any harry potter fics, but this DM is quite like Draco Malfoy (at least in the fics where he's the protagonist with the host smirk!) :) enjoying your story!
TinySliceOfHeaven chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
squeee, this seems promising from the first chappy. me likey. just um, in the Author's note, and in the story, you misspell prologue, but you don't in the chapter title, if that makes sense. just letting you know. :)
oh and um, just, though its not part of the actual prologue.
I'm sorry, I'm a grammar freak. :D
Kazu'sTsundere21 chapter 39 . 6/3/2013
That was... amazing. No other words. I cried. Multiple times.
TheTwinDiaries chapter 31 . 5/30/2013
URGGHHH...KISS ALREADY.!
its killing me.!
Nicole7579 chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Just wanted to let you and any fans of this story that your work was plagiarized. The story is over on fanfiction. net and it was brought to attention because the author also plagiarized 100 Love Letters by Aurette. Everything is basically copied word for word. If you are a fan of this story please report this author as we are trying to get this author taken down, it seems all of her "work" was copied from fictionpress writers
The writer is blythe5 on fanfiction. net. I already reported her. Just wanted to give you a heads up.

Nicole7579 (too lazy to sign in) : )
Cool chapter 32 . 5/16/2013
I love the batman reference you put in here...
Great chapter!
I love it!
Black is Beautiful chapter 39 . 5/15/2013
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! That was amazing I really loved it the ending was so cute!
Daimexen chapter 39 . 5/8/2013
This. Story. I don't have enough words to express how much I loved it. I have stayed up all night reading this, despite having school in the morning, just because I couldn't go to bed without finishing the wonderful story that will most likely live in my heart forever. Your charcters were amazing, full of depth and surprising twists, and honestly, characters that I adore more than any other character I've been introduced to.
Emma chapter 29 . 5/7/2013
Awww I am full on crying now...
Emma chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Ive been looking for a modern day version of Emma, and it seems I've just found one... Btw, my name is Emma xxx
Courtney chapter 39 . 5/5/2013
This story is absolutely amazing, well written and contains an intriguing storyline and characters! :D you did a wonderful job and have excellent writting skills. Thankyou for giving me the pleasure of reading such a great story. Good luck with any future stories :)
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