|Reviews for The Matchmaker|
| rae chapter 39 . 7/14/2013
Loved your story :)
| cassiealan34 chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
This is amazing
| RainEpelt chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Honestly I usually don't read romance, but since I'm here I might as well take a looksy
| Impurity chapter 39 . 7/12/2013
One of the best stories I've read on Fictionpress. *Hands down* this was amazing. Loved how you developed the characters and your details. Admire your time and effort in writing such a fantastic and time consuming story like this. Truly wonderful. Loved this story to pieces.
| Laenaya chapter 39 . 7/10/2013
This was absolutely amazing! It was definitely the best story to read first on fictionpress!
| Aspired Writer chapter 5 . 7/8/2013
This is really good. xD
| Jae Shin chapter 38 . 7/2/2013
The last paragraph was... phenomenal.
You are a truly gifted writer, with a knack for describing scenarios and emotions just so that we readers can actually see and feel the things that the characters do.
Keep on writing, dear author.
God bless you!
Hang in there and happy writing,
- Jae Shin -
| AnaGirl chapter 38 . 7/1/2013
I don't know where to start.
(Well, excuses are in order) I actually read this story about a week ago.
3pm - find story
11pm - go to bed
7am - wake up and run to computer
7:05 to 9am - read
So, after that, I needed some time away from the computer.
Saying that you have a great style of writing doesn't do you justice. It isn't style that drew me in. It was the dialogue.
The vocabulary is really diverse, and the fact that it was kept up throughout the entirety of the story makes it seem natural, as opposed to forced.
As well as that, the banter between Darien and Emma was so witty and intelligent. It wasn't flat, or cliche, and it didn't continue to use the same old "You're a jerk." "Well, duh. Does it seem like I care." If you said this in the story, it was followed up by something so awesome, that I didn't even notice.
I'm not often fond of romance stories, and thought I'd be somewhat disappointed, particularly if the story went offtrack and didn't focus on the stated plotline. Again, however, the writing, and vocabulary, kept me drawn in.
One more thing to say ('cause my dinner's paging me), the development of the Emma and Darien's romance was great, and I was particularly pleased at how they "realized their romantic feelings". Once again, you didn't approach the subject with cliche (well, maybe a little), and the feelings were realistic.
(Aaagh, I have to say one more thing before I go!)
This is constructive criticism, really, and not so much praise... sorry!
Darien and Emma were fantastic characters, developed quite superbly, but the other characters seemed to fall a little flat.
While I do understand that he was not necessarily a huge part of the story, I think it would have been beneficial if you had focused a little bit more on Brock.
OH, I really have to go now! Thank you so much for such an amazing, beautiful story!
| fan chapter 2 . 6/22/2013
i dont know if you've read any harry potter fics, but this DM is quite like Draco Malfoy (at least in the fics where he's the protagonist with the host smirk!) :) enjoying your story!
| TinySliceOfHeaven chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
squeee, this seems promising from the first chappy. me likey. just um, in the Author's note, and in the story, you misspell prologue, but you don't in the chapter title, if that makes sense. just letting you know. :)
oh and um, just, though its not part of the actual prologue.
I'm sorry, I'm a grammar freak. :D
| Kazu'sTsundere21 chapter 39 . 6/3/2013
That was... amazing. No other words. I cried. Multiple times.
| TheTwinDiaries chapter 31 . 5/30/2013
its killing me.!
| Nicole7579 chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Just wanted to let you and any fans of this story that your work was plagiarized. The story is over on fanfiction. net and it was brought to attention because the author also plagiarized 100 Love Letters by Aurette. Everything is basically copied word for word. If you are a fan of this story please report this author as we are trying to get this author taken down, it seems all of her "work" was copied from fictionpress writers
The writer is blythe5 on fanfiction. net. I already reported her. Just wanted to give you a heads up.
Nicole7579 (too lazy to sign in) : )
| Cool chapter 32 . 5/16/2013
I love the batman reference you put in here...
I love it!
| Black is Beautiful chapter 39 . 5/15/2013
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! That was amazing I really loved it the ending was so cute!