Reviews for Going Under
saturn567 chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
amazing job!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
I like this, and I really like the repetition. *does a little dance* YAY! Your back! I was like, um, where did she go off to? haha. But, really nice poem, keep it up. God bless.

-Ashelin
Witchwithsoul chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
This is ok but all we get from it is 'help me' try to add something else, maybe more emotion. keep writing.