Reviews for why
softer side of apples chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
WOW! I'M SPEECHLESS... GREAT PIECE..
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
i like this.

it's pretty.
Holly Rose E chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
this... really touches homebase with me. i've felt these same kinds of things before. and i like that you bolded the letters to spell 'because', that adds a nice little oomph to it.
ten pts above average chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
wow...short but amazingly powerful
Wylloa chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
moribidly beatiful. Wonderfully written. A amazing decription of a relationship gone bad.
magnusthewolf chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
cool..very blunt, raw, and emotional...great job
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Nice! I love the bolding of some letters to spell out because, very interesting... Kind of like a word search! Anyway, I liked it. It was nicely written and good idea.

Thanks for the review of "Imprisoned"! I know I could just have used reply and I had already reviewed what you'd written, but this poem looked good.
dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
i like how the bolded letters spell out 'because.' i adore hidden words in piece such as these.
x account closed x chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
the notsohidden answer made this worth it.

this was beautiful
teh tarik chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
because because because

it's beautiful

*imperfections complete you* - stunning line.i loved the whole image of black bleeding lashes, maybe because of my strange obsession with black tears, mascara etc.
B. M. Reed chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
I love the bolded letters spelling out "because". This is a great poem.