Reviews for The one to leave
Wylloa chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
I really liked this. Like most of your pieces, its very emotional and very true, but i think like this one because i can relate. Its hurts doesnt it, expecting to be the one to live it out and being wrong.

I really liked the lines

"In your new bed your large black crate

That was meant to hold me

You wrote your ending"

"You wrote your ending" really rings. Kudos!