|Reviews for Christmas Carol Reloaded|
| Baefild chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
I think you should print this out and bring it to playwrights lab on some tuesday so we can read it and get a feel for timing. I don't however think that it is necessary to expand this much more. it seems rather complete as it is. also, this is a basically a long joke with without a really strong punch line. so instead of extending it with past present and future, i think you should just come up with a really damn good way of ending it on a super high funny note. give the audience on last huge laugh before you're done with them.