Reviews for Pure
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
I like the strong feeling of hatred here.

Just one thing: "Everything horribleness" doesn't seem to me to go together; they're both nouns. Maybe:

Pure wickedness, hatefullness

Horribleness and…

Or:

Pure wickedness, everything

Horrible, mean, and...

Just an idea though. Sorry if it's my problem because I didn't get something.

Isabella-May
Atheneon chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
And the list goes on...

Who are you describing here? They seem to be a focus of hate for you. A person, an idea maybe? Pure (Evil)

Good, the end isn't very powerful as a wrap-up. It seems like you wished to continue your list.
Basara chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
wretched?

nice...
Ashelin chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Wow, what a cliffhanger. I wonder who this could be. Most likely either God or your father? Well, good poem anyway, and as always, God bless.

-Ashelin