Reviews for Turned Away
Atheneon chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Very powerful. juxtaposed meter but that doesn't matter, it still fits. Very powerful!
Meihan chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
short,sweet, and sad at the same time ) very much )
Basara chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
ouch...

nice...
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
short and sweet. nice
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
Short but powerful. Good job.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Sad, angsty. :( I guess that is kind of life though. But, then again, there is so much more. Gosh, I love it. I mean, sometimes it seems so hard, and like everything in the world is evil. But oh, man, there is so much beauty and wonder. It fills me with joy. Great poem, and God bless! I hope all is well!

-Ashelin
Stormie Greye chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Very nice! I liked the question you started with. They wouldn't realize, or else they would not have done it. They're probably too comsumed into their own mind to know, or sadly enough, even care. It's a big slap in the face with reality. Keep it up. :)
Cheshire XIII chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Wonderful Haiku, it seemed so sad though.