Reviews for Misconception REWRITE |
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![]() ![]() ![]() omg they're going to kiss? that's ridiculous! haha, but all the Willy's are being stupid. update soon! ~mia |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm finding this story extremely amusing, and well written at the same time, which is always a good thing. I'll be back for more. Olivine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omfg. Lurak is PRO! He's so in the zone: forest romantic setting... Babbling brook lovely soundtrack... Really good looking... Reciting everything that would make a girl go weak in the knees WHILE looking like he actually means it... but... I'm just getting a vibe that this should not be happening. She should run away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() jerrod really doesn't like her huh? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is such a good story. i love it! update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh.. interesting. I like. - If I give you brownies, will you update sooner? *hands brownies over* - LL |
![]() ![]() ![]() iT IS GETTING EVEN BETTER! How do you do it! I didn't see any mistakes to so...GO YOU . |
![]() ![]() ![]() what is up jerrod's butt? lol update soon! ~mia |
![]() ![]() You have a lot of run-on sentences. Also in the last chapter it said that Bri tripped over her high heels but you earlier stated that she wore flip-flops due to Kori's height. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like Lurak. Lol. He and Alex would have such a Romeo and Juliet-esque thing going on. Good chapter. More updates, please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOSH! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont like conan, that was a cheap shot, but at least alex won ) update soon! ~mia |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, you updated! Great chapter! - |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great! i can't wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome Devia. When i first started reading i was like: "OMFG! It's mE!" 'cause I'm Christina and Im Chris. XOX Chris Please update soon/ again |