Wow. I absolutely love it. I was actually brought to tears when Cori explained her learning disability. Maybe it's a combination of being overly sensitive right now and reading this, but it takes quite a bit to bring me to tears.

You have a strong grasp of punctuation, grammar, etc. - which pleases me to no end. (: I'm curious and excited to see what heights you will be taking this story to.

- Jenina