OMG OMG OMG! Katya got rescued! Yay! Cori and Nick kissed (even if they didn't mean it)! Yay! Nick gave in to Rezanov...not so yay. I can't wait to find out what happens next! And the website thing sounds awesome. :D Incredible chapter!

Wow! That was one exciting, brilliant chapter! I really cant wait to see how the next chapter turns out. Rezanov is really gettingon my nerves. Now that Katya is safe, I do wonder how Cori and Nick are going to get themselves out of this mess.

Poor Nick... he really is getting tortured a lot ;;

Good luck with the new site. I'll miss this story on Fictionpress, but a new home for Saving Nicholas and the Firebird series seems really really nice!

I will defo be looking forward to seeing them again in August. Good luck! :D

So glad that we'll still be able to read the story after you remove it. Sorry about your lack of reviews but the end of school gets pretty busy... Anyway, really enjoyed the chapter except when Nick's agreeing to cooperate. Maybe he's lying...but otherwise it's kinda cliche...just what I think...Anyway good job hope to see a new chap soon!

I think I was in fourth grade (and therefore, pure of mouth and mind...haha) when I started brushing up on my Russian, and the alphabet book I was using gave examples for every letter. Imagine my trauma when I attempted to pronounce the word "shield", and then heard my parents say it, too. Hahahaha.

I'm glad that the plot's moving forward - exciting!

And on a completely random note: Firebird series. I think you were in touch with the writer, right? Is there any particular reason as to why she disappeared? Getting published? :)

Cool.. I love that line, 'Live when they could not'.

Sigh... It's so secret mission thing. Good work! Keep it up!

heyy! i cant write much bcuz im in some relative's house and ive already been on the computer for too long and thats kind of rude when ur supposed to visiting someone...especially since ive never even been here before...lol anyways, i didnt have time to read the chapters at RMWM so im glad you updated here because it reminded me. and i waskinda wondering what happened to veronica, its been a while. and omg so much stuff has happened since! im still in shock over nick's moms death..at least katya is still alive. anyways, bye!

Oh this situation is getting a little messy. Please update again soon; I'm anxious to see how this rescue mission works out!

-FrenzyFan78

(This is such a fantastically short review. Esh. Oh well, keep up the good work!)

Hi..

I say, I agree with Skido, the character developement is really well done.

And there are two other things, why I really love this story:

1)The plot- It's not typical or cliche, very original and it seems that you've been thinking it all clearly through.

2)Places, facts and so on- The research you've done is HUGE, or so I think. All the facts, places, cities names and everything makes this story so real.

Well, can't put it in words how much I wait for next chapter

~Parilis

Hey there, EmpressFunk from Deviantart pointed me in the direction of this little fic. And I'm ... really really enjoying it! I love the gradual change in interaction between Nick and Cori from the beginning to the story to where they are now. If there's one thing I like, it's good character developement. :) Keep it up, I'm desperate to know what happens next!

Wow, keep up the good work. Now it's starting to get interesting.

you must really do a lot of reasearch and while you might think we don't notice, we do! it makes a huge difference, I mean, you can just tell when something has been researched. props for that, not a lot of people make the trouble to do their research.

you're doing a really nice job with this story! and that's great to hear that she's working on getting it published, i pray that works out ( ;

Cori is obviously not as smart as Nick, but he shouldn't have jumped to conclusions either. I really like your story so far, and I'm sure as the story progresses you'll show us more about Nick's past..wonder how Cori is gonna fit into all of this. Let me read the summary again haha... what's the big seceret!

Shrewsbury, Massachusetts is an actual place, with a population of 22,674(courtesy to are all the settings in your story real? it's weird because someone either 1. makes up a town, or city 2. doesn't name the setting 3. or uses New York City or something like that

did you just pick it randomly? anyway, I'm enjoying your story immensely so far!

oh, for a moment I thought he was going to make it. He sounded so confident that he would. so far I'm interested, and I like the fact that you named Leningrad, which I googled and found out it's a former name of St Petersburg. nice touch!

last note: this reminds me of Firebird, oh how I miss it so ( ;

Hey! Good to see a new chapter! :)

I think that it's not just a motiff ingrained in people's minds (referring to the assumption that Cory was in trouble); frankly, being caught in a country without documents is a nasty position to be put in. Plus, Russia's history is not exactly a friendly one when it comes to foreigners. (My parents are from said country; I've heard...interesting...stories.) But the language is pretty. Hehe. Even if my grammar, when speaking it, is really out-there.

Okay. Now, to actually read the chapter.

oh thats sad.