I'm so happy you posted! Keep it up, i can't wait to find out what happens next!

Very exciting.

But i think you should make the chapters longer.

and the action a bit faster.

Hey...I speak Russian, so I'd like to suggest that you check over your transliteration, etc. for this chapter. It seems a bit off on some words.

Is it Finland Station and Vladimir Lenin?

I hope so, because that took me a very long time to find.

I loved this chapter! I was so happy that this was updated. Nick was rather short with Cori in this chapter, wasn't he... Well, I suppose it's understandable, seeing as his sister and mum have been kidnapped...

I eagerly await your next update!

Katty.

Oh, boy...

You're back! It makes me happy. I love how we're seeing more and more of the different facets of Cori and Nick, especially Cori. Even though there's also a playful part of Nick I didn't know was in there before. (and he's such a boy - who else would teach someone how to say go ski into a cunt in a foreign language?)

As for the bonus question - I'm not positive about this, but I'll give it a shot. (Only the first one, though.) Was it the Ladozhsky station?

Much love...TinuvielDork

Yes you finally finished it! I'm so proud, and I very much enjoyed it. Here's to hoping your next chapter will come sooner? D Haha.

-FrenzyFan78

thanks for the update. and i like the balance cori brings to nick's turbulent state of mind.

i wonder what cori's family is going through right now

Don't know the answer for the question... :(

But still, this chapter was really cool. Reallyreally cool.

Dorogaya moya...That was sweet.

~Mylene

More! Write more!

So... when are you going to post some more?

-FrenzyFan78

I was first attracted to your writings after reading the spin-off you did of jcjaquez's story, Firebird and I must say, I don't regret spending my time reading your work at all.

I really like your introduction (or rather, this first chapter) of your story which I must admit, happens to be one of the few that really can catch my attention and have me craving for more. The way you keep the suspense building throughout the chapter is remarkable and I especially love the emotional roller-coaster you put the readers on. Everything in the first part of the chapter builds up to an amazing climax and just when the reader thinks that all would go well, the bombshell is dropped.

An amazing and very well done first chapter. I'm looking forward to more from you!

ahahaa! I'm so exited to read this! And from the first line I can already tell it's going to be awesome!

Keep writing! You're fantastico at it!

Gack!

This chapter was awesome. You know how when you read a really exciting book and it gets to the really good part so you try to read it all really fast but end up skipping ahead of yourself because you just really want to take it all in? I did that.

The action scenes in this story are great. Seriously. Most people can't pull off writing action scenes but you, in this case, are the cat's pajamas.

I feel stupid because I didn't catch the different last name the first time the officer asked him. I only noticed when Cori noticed. So props on the sudden change. Actually, props on the whole chapter. (As usual, it kicked ass.)

For the bonus question thing...I know that it's in Senate Square but I don't know the name of the church right off the bat...but after some googling I read that it was first called the Church of Nicholas. And I know that it's Lutheran.

Omg, this is a realy really good story. Much action, yay.

And a good chapter.

Oh, isn't it the St. Ni.. sth? Or am I making it up, I've been there but I can't recall the name. :)

Update!:)

~Mylene

Wow, am loving this story so much. You write really well. Can't wait for the next update!