Gosh, this is so good...

Smack was acting weird when they made it to airport.

I can't wait til' they get to Russia...

Update, update!:)

Here are two typos that I found. Nothing big. But I'm putting them here in case you haven't noticed them,yet.

It happened in seconds, to fast for Cori to even comprehend. - Do you mean too fast? -

Both The police and thugs routinely harass people with darker skin - This one's obvious. -

Cori's family must be really, really pissed off and confused. I'm surprised the Russian maffia didn't just kill them. I didn't think it was so crucial to be subtle, considering what's at stake. I'm glad they aren't, though. That would've been horrific. But now that they say that Cori was alright, won't they discover that she has her Dad's credit card? Will they cut it off?

Regarding Smack and Dan... Did Nick save their lives in some dark alleyway? Why was Smack so terrified when Nick said they were even? Was it because of the danger that Nick was in?

Very action-packed so far.

heyy! nice to see you updated so soon! i dont know if i sent a review for the last chapter..did i? well, i'll check later. this story is so cool! i love it. im really sad max died though...isnt he from firebird? because i noticed some names mentioned are the same as the ones in JC Jaquez's story...yes im real slow...well, i have to go now but i promise i'll have a longer review next time! take care,

-Michelle

Hey, it's me, the author of Hurricane Wind. Thanks for reviewing my story and I'll return the favor.

The first chapter is interesting and I wonder what'll exactly happen next. Your summary also makes me wonder what everything is all about. Good grammar and it takes place in Russia! I've hardly read about Russia in fanfics.

To answer your question in Hurricane Wind, I live in neither Canada nor Korea. I live in Western U.S.A. I needed to make an estimate of Vancouver and Whistler. I guess my mathematics was thrown off thanks to the fact that I'm not good with maps. Also, I read somewhere that Whistler was a resort town, but I don't know all the details. Could you give me some? I don't want to screw up Canada. Thanks!

I'll review again when I finish the story.

Just when I think I've read everything worth reading on this website, I find this :) Great story! The characters are likeable, the plot suspenseful, and it all flows very well together!

aww her brother totally had her back.

I must have more!

I really love this story, and I NEED the next chapter!

I love Nick, and I desparately want to know what happens next.

(Can you tell that maybe I want you to update soon? :) )

I think this might be my favorite story on fictonpress...:)

A good chapter again:)!

And every next chapter is better than the last one...

“Devilishly handsome, my ass!”

lol

Since Cori basically got her ear shot off, is she going to contract an infection of some kind? Wouldn't she need stitches? Anyway, great chapter, again.

Can I just say I'm totally excited that they're going to russia?

This is so much fun! :P

Haha...I'm the first person to review for chapter 5, I think. Probably because I'm the only nut up at this hour.

Can't wait for the next update!

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

ohmigod. dude, please update soon 'cuz the suspense is killing me. what happens!

omg that waz a really really good update my gawd... plz update soon!