Oh, My, GOD!

It's so good, I love it, I love it...

Other Russian I understood, but I dunno the meaning of this: Rogati’y D’yavol ?

Looking forward to next chapter.

~Parilis

Oh, wow, this just keeps getting better! And, somehow, I have the feeling that Cori's going to be missing a lot more than just dinner. :)

Anyways, this is fantastic! I'm loving this. Cori and Nick are such different characters, but I love both of them! I can't wait to see more of this. Keep it going!

Much love...TinuvielDork

Confession time!

I must admit, after reading this chapter I was quite anxious to see what happened. So, feeling bored because I was determinedly procrastinating on writing my paper, I browsed through some of your art (which was quite good, by the way). Anyway, I came across a lovely link on one drawing of yours that led me to find the next 3 chapters.

So now I'm three chapters ahead of you on fictionpress, so I'll have to wait even longer. (PS That's also the reason why I probably won't review the next three, unless you change them and I need to read them again.)

So! More reviews faster updates? I hope so. Keep posting chapters and I'll keep reading!

Very interesting. I am looking forward to reading more. It's really hard to give advice on a story without reading the whole thing first, so I am very excited about reading this all the way through.

Keep up the good work.

~Tirzah

This is amazing. Yo Serio. Yo necessito saber que Sucede después

. (I NEED to know what happens next.) Though you will have to update SON...or me, my friends, and my fictional characters will bombard you. with melons. better than nothing.

aww that was a good read.

may I now eat my tongue (sp?), it was an autobiography after all, sorry

this is super super nit-picky so disreguard it if you'd like, but as well as I can discern so far Nick and Cori appear to be working on a biography project which is when people write about someone else, not an autobiography, which is when someone writes about themselves. Unless of course next chapter I will discover that they really are going to write and present a paper on Cori or something like that.

otherwise it seems very well thought out and I look forward to continuing.

Lalaith

Great story! It makes me somewhat sad that Max and Andrei's fates ended up being what they are, and who knows what's happening with the rest of the boys, but you do a good job of connecting their storylines and yet keeping this a separate stories. The characters are also likeable, so I'm definitely looking forward to more! :)

Whoa, it's really, really good. *Would like an update soon, please?*

Nick has an interesting character, prologue was good also.

~Parilis

very very interesting. really impressed. waiting for more.

wow good story.

ha. Artem and Firebird. :)

sorry, I just had to mention that.

Corinne! I read a book about someone called Corinna, which is (I believe) a variation of that name ... means 'maiden' or something equally tame and proper, right? *snicker* No wonder Cori hates it.

Me like so far!

*goes on to read yet more*

Yay, I'm finally reading your story! *beams*

Interesting. Poor Cori! And Nick's ... interesting ...

Yay, interesting. Word of the week.

...

*goes on to read more*

YEAH! You rock! At first I wasn't sure whether it was a continuation of Firebird or not, but later, yeah. It's so sad! Maxim rocked! (note the past tense)

It's been a good story so far, but I found the tone a little depressing. Nothing wrong with that, but I was just wondering if it was on purpose. Also, although i bet you're gonna reveal it later, i was wondering why Cori's mom had such a foreign (Russian?) name. What nationality is she?

Oh, some sentences I found were a bit long winded. Eg.: 'Anusha Lewis’ lightly accented voice sounded far away over the line and echoed slightly' The echoed slightly sounds a bit off.

Otherwise, two thumbs up! Love your story! So sad! Max... Keep writing! Can't wait to read more!