Reviews for don't ask her to explain
marianmovedout chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
that actually made me cry. Good for you, white trash.
Maggot Blood chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Beautiful but so very sad. If this really happen then I am sorry and I wish you the best of luck with all your dreams. Amazing poem and I cant stop loving your work.

fairytale failure chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
wow, thats so beautiful in a sad way. It almost has a hint of rap sometimes, that makes it more interesting. Reminds me of someone I know, too, at least parts of it. It has good rhythm, too.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/6/2006

You are amazing.

Seriously; you write poetry like God, beautifully.

- Noelle
i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
this would be beautiful spoken poetry.
BrokenHeartedAngel chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
whow. i like this. it ounds really good. i like the last line the best. it sounds so perfect. good job!