Reviews for The Photograph
elle chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
beautiful...
Omok chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Oh the dear colours of the world, oh the dear faith of humans. Oh the cruel love, oh the life.

One word, realistic, is all i can come up with. For it was beautiful, for it was cruel. For it was Life. in a sense; this will happen to a lot of people, memories that past, memories that happened and weight nothing more. because of life they cannot follow their heart, because of life they cannot follow the fate they wish to choose.

Sad, True, Cruel, beautiful. )
Rukaya chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
that was soo well written and so heartfelt. I could feel her pain. great job writing.
Nightmare Wolf chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Lovely and bittersweet.
WeekendFame chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
i love this :)

it's not usually a 'tense' i like to read

but it was so good! lots of emotion, there.

great work
amnesiac-vampire chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
aww poor...er mom character. questions and what ifs are pesky little things that keep people up at night, yet one still can't help but think of them. great oneshot, it was pretty. keep up the good work!
The Hermitess chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
Moving-very much so. Makes me long for them to have had more summers. -sob-
cloudxtears chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
very sad...i really like it though! meh life just sucks huh.
Calico.Grace chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
This is very heartfelt. The innocence of the questioning child and the mother's reminiscing have a nice effect on the mood; looking into the past, and remembering both the good and the bad. I like this!
Tasyin chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
My first thought when reading this was that it was pretty, which when I think about it is a strange thing to think about written words. But it fits here. The imagery is simple, it's not overly descriptive, it's invredibly honest. A really beautiful piece of writing.

Tasyin
mate.feed.kill.repeat chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
Hmm... Interesting.

It's very intriguing; I couldn't look away while I was reading it.

A few spelling errors (more like mis-tapped keys or something) but nothing too big.

But yea, it's pretty cool. Cheers.

-stixerz-
Bubblegumwhore chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
This is very good. Such pretty detail.