beautiful...

Oh the dear colours of the world, oh the dear faith of humans. Oh the cruel love, oh the life.

One word, realistic, is all i can come up with. For it was beautiful, for it was cruel. For it was Life. in a sense; this will happen to a lot of people, memories that past, memories that happened and weight nothing more. because of life they cannot follow their heart, because of life they cannot follow the fate they wish to choose.

Sad, True, Cruel, beautiful. )

that was soo well written and so heartfelt. I could feel her pain. great job writing.

Lovely and bittersweet.

i love this :)

it's not usually a 'tense' i like to read

but it was so good! lots of emotion, there.

great work

aww poor...er mom character. questions and what ifs are pesky little things that keep people up at night, yet one still can't help but think of them. great oneshot, it was pretty. keep up the good work!

Moving-very much so. Makes me long for them to have had more summers. -sob-

very sad...i really like it though! meh life just sucks huh.

This is very heartfelt. The innocence of the questioning child and the mother's reminiscing have a nice effect on the mood; looking into the past, and remembering both the good and the bad. I like this!

My first thought when reading this was that it was pretty, which when I think about it is a strange thing to think about written words. But it fits here. The imagery is simple, it's not overly descriptive, it's invredibly honest. A really beautiful piece of writing.

~Tasyin

Hmm... Interesting.

It's very intriguing; I couldn't look away while I was reading it.

A few spelling errors (more like mis-tapped keys or something) but nothing too big.

But yea, it's pretty cool. Cheers.

-stixerz-

This is very good. Such pretty detail.