Reviews for Identity
Ellica Dramis chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
very interesting! you should totally post more. (Synapse is cute, too...) You really like your futuristic stuff, huh?
Mayuka chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
This is pretty interesting. I think it's a good start. Please continue!
Limited Edition chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Synapse's name makes me think of brain cells floating in uh alcohol...

The first scene could be catching since it's a simply...safely catching scene, but it's not that elaborated. Also the line "Far away, Synapse woke." is very safe, almost cliché. How many times haven't you yourself read such a line or seen it on a movie?

The description isn't even everywhere, sometimes there's too much and sometimes none at all. The vocabulary is good, almost too good at times; don't squeeze in too much, it destroys the flow. The descriptions are very vivid and picturesque yes. But then I don't get what happens with the gun and stuff...where did that come from...Alright, good luck hun, nice story yes