Reviews for Fatal Crash
DragonGirl720 chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
thats cool. I wish I could write that way but unfortantly.
Flying Ninja of the Midmorning chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
O MAKARI'S DAD! HE DIED! SINCE WHEN! Oh noes, oh noes...I need to send Makari my warmest snuggle...

Oh, but in all seriousness, that was good. Keep up the good work! I hope to see more by you soon...
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
i like this, i love the style. all in all good poem.