|Reviews for the princess|
| Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
This is great. I just wish for a period at the end of the first stanza.
Perhaps also keep capitalisation consistent? As in no caps (minus "Nintendo"?
Otherise, love "gold Nintendo" and "asleep in the breadth".
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
If you meant the Nintendo Entertainment System from the 80's then golden is the right word.