Reviews for the princess
Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
This is great. I just wish for a period at the end of the first stanza.

Perhaps also keep capitalisation consistent? As in no caps (minus "Nintendo"?

Otherise, love "gold Nintendo" and "asleep in the breadth".

.:midnight:.
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
If you meant the Nintendo Entertainment System from the 80's then golden is the right word.

~SirScott