Reviews for the princess
Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
This is great. I just wish for a period at the end of the first stanza.

Perhaps also keep capitalisation consistent? As in no caps (minus "Nintendo"?

Otherise, love "gold Nintendo" and "asleep in the breadth".

Sir Scott chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
If you meant the Nintendo Entertainment System from the 80's then golden is the right word.