|Reviews for A Crack In This Heart Of Mine|
| RaisdenCaptivity chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
Wow! Yet another brilliant piece of work from you. I'm very impressed. Bravo!
| anti trends chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
the message is there but the execution needs work and also the ending... it got all wierd and hard to read and fallow to many changes in the flow,
ps: check out some of my own work, im new so dont hold back be honest