|Reviews for Hellbound|
| William Kayspear chapter 29 . 6/8/2013
Why is it removed?! I've just went through 29 chapters of "removed"! Please unremove this story
| teamastley101 chapter 2 . 4/27/2012
Why the fuck is it removed?
| bugula2009 chapter 29 . 11/27/2011
| DorkExpress chapter 29 . 9/13/2011
I think its awesome, cool, and adorable that your brother and sister help you out with drawing and such. I liked your story, I'm going to read your sisters thg I'll read yours after. That's how it goes right? Or can I read them seperatly? Anyway. It was cool.
| sarah.evangelina chapter 14 . 7/15/2011
I just started reading this, and I might have some typo's or grammatical errors...I'm currently sleep deprived and my eyes sting. But! I 3 the concept of this story, however, you should totally add someone to kick Lucious down on his ass, a girl. :D
| Candescence chapter 29 . 6/25/2011
This story was great. It's very refreshing since it deals with Princes of Hell and that witch stuff goin on. You don't usually read about it on this site. If you ever come back and edit this I suggest you mark the areas where the scenes transition. I think you did it on some, just not the majority. And then there was a chapter, probably the one before this that didn't use quotes, but some other funky thing. I may just be picky, but it just bugged me as I read. And then I felt Asmodeous was a bit out of character towards the end of this story. He was a lot more naive than his usual charming self and less...confident. It's a new thing for him, I get it, but not so much that his personality angles away about 90 degrees. I really liked this story; it's very cute
| heckofarice chapter 29 . 6/9/2011
I don't like the ending :( There should be no ending! Why does it have to end? It was awesome though :)
| heckofarice chapter 20 . 6/8/2011
Definitely fluff :) And you are hearing from a mostly silent reader, so you did real good :)
| heckofarice chapter 9 . 6/8/2011
I'm guessing he now owns the kid :)
| SootyKiwi chapter 28 . 4/23/2011
What does 'et cere tin' mean?
| CutieSOS chapter 29 . 4/8/2011
This story was amazing!
| Fantasy's Dreamer chapter 29 . 3/13/2011
i thought your story was really cute and very nice and i loved the demons added to this love story
| Old fragrance chapter 29 . 2/1/2011
I like your story:)
But I'm curious about Ana and Lucious _ Their relationship is quite interesting... I think I'll read the one shot (oh and Heavenbound :) )
(Forgive me if there are any mistakes, I'm french so not my native language _ )
| I'mN0tADuckP3ngu1n chapter 29 . 1/5/2011
I absolutely love this story and Heavenbound :) My favorites I have read yet on this site.
| DNAstar chapter 29 . 1/2/2011
kool story but what about Ana and Lucious? i wanna know what happens to them there cute XD