Reviews for Hellbound |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I wanted to review after reading the whole story but I guess I like it too much! The second part of this chapter was just hilarious, especially the last part which made me laugh out loud. I like your sense of humour and writing style. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Perfect ending. Now all I have to look forward to on FictionPress are those one shots. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story, can't wait to read more soon, but it's late and I'd like to sleep. Haha.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for finishing this story! I loved it so much! You are such a good writer! I look forward to reading your other stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you should put breaks between asmodeus' parts and lillith's. it just makes it easier to know who's talking |
![]() ![]() Aw! Makes me wanna cry :[ I love Hellbound and its so sad to see it end :''[ |
![]() ![]() ![]() why wasn't luciuos mad at ana? if i were him i'd probably snap at her to leave me alone, she seems like she likes to bug too. I don't know i kinda think Ana is annoying but hey. wonder when asmodeus will get back... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank God I'm not a silent reader, huh? :P SO IT HAS ENDED! NUU! The good thing is that I can always look forward to EarthB, and now that new story! MIHIHIHI. I'm exwited. What a torture... first HeavenB though. That part with Ary and Sashy was so bizarre, yet funny. It was cute, but it didn't cease to be strange XD She's a baby! But heh, age means nothing to our supernatural boys. Aw, I'm sad to see the story end... I'm craving an epilogue. Poor Asmy, he's so gonna get it. Btw, for some reason I loved the description of his handwriting. It's very fitting. Do you have a handwriting fetish? You like mine! KYA! Now I got exwited again. I should prolly go write some more. What say you? Best Wishes from Big Sis PD: Big sis knows what happens in advance, mwahahaha! |
![]() ![]() You wrapped this story up brilliantly! I was just thinking - wouldn't it be great to read about aeron's story? But then i read the note and realised that you are going to write one! YAY! I can't wait to read it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww that was so cute! i really enjoyed this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really cool, and definitley worth the wait. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait till lucious/ana one shot |
![]() ![]() aw she kissed him that was cute I can't wait until they are actually together! ~Rei |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is Bloddy freaking awesome,i almost cried when you 'killed' Asmodeus. really it's true! update soon please. |