Reviews for Buried
Lounalune chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
I really liked this poem. I'm usually a bit sceptical about poems the modern poems that don't have a clear structure, but this one pulls it off. The metaphor at the end is great.
Rocket62204 chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
I love it. Really great work!
hey maria chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
It's good that this poem shows your emotions, but I think it needs to be refined a little. In the first stanza, the last line doesn't seem to have any relevance. And what I noticed in the second and third stanzas is that the images aren't very original or striking, bordering on cliche. I can see what you are trying to say, but it would be more effective if you said it differently. I did like the the snowball metaphor; it's original and it relates to the days blurring together, to the difficulty of functioning in day-to-day life. Nice job.
Shadows in the Fire chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
I feel like this. Love the last stanzas. Hope to see more of your new stuff up soon!