|Reviews for You Watch Me|
| Amethyst Lin chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
There are some people I want to say this to. The emphasis in the last words of each stanza is great!
It seems structurally different from the other works that I've read but still good!
| im.a.werewolf.rawr chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
The dashes are an interesting touch. It gives the reader the sense of time progressing. Wonderful work!
| his-troll chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
i like this one. I read your 'Bleeding' one and didn't like it much. But this one is great. Its meaning to me is that someone is trying to get a friend to open up, and says that they will always be there, but doesn't know if they're friend will ever trust them. I'm currently in such a situation, so maybe thats why I can relate and like it so much. Its a good topic for that fact, that so many people will be able to relate to it. Its a style that I don't often like, but this is an exception. Good job.
| Riley Kathleen chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Thanks for the review!
Anyhoo, I like this a lot. It's really odd, and different, but it still makes sense. I love how it ends too! I also like how you split sometimes up, and how the lines are spaced.
| McKenzie Drestire chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
I liked it, the layout was a bit strange but it worked for the continuations of lines and ideas.
Peace out, Kenzie