|Reviews for volcano girls|
| kelsi bones chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
The imagery in this so amazing and vivid!
| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
This is just amazing. I can't even pick a favorite line. I like the idea of the poem, and the way you worded it was so powerful.
| Robinson888008 chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
oh my oh my
I love the first verse - people hate because they are afraid to love. It is easier for the girls to hate each other because it's their way of feeling so intense an emotion.
| Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
There is a twisted - litte girl - like quality in this. 'dies a little death' - Amazing.
| she smolders chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
The entire poem was brillant. That one expression 'the little death' has always made such an impact on me and I've always wanted to use it in a poem but know that I would not be able to use it as successfully as you.
The last verse in parentheses reads bittersweet and kinda makes me think of heartache.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
I like this a lot.. its extremely powerful and I love the random capitalization.. great job
| Kavita Najim chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
Is this called Volcano Girls after the strip club?
| these travels chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
this was perfectly imperfect.
| kaylajac chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
you blow me absolutely away. you always do.
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
What are the differences? The greatest illusion is the illusion of separation...
Heh, anyways, I wouldn't say this is my favorite, but it's definately up there. Teehee, great job, Kuroi-chan.
Until next time
| none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
twisted and a little sick, but so true to life, and some relationships are just a ring-around-the-rosy like this one.
| bagheaded liar chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
goddamn, I search for good poetry and I find shitloads.
Sounds good and is good and I'm in love with it.
| poet tree chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
Wow. There's just something so deliciously decadent about your poetry, I love it. The last verse is perfection.
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
pretty...it's nostaglic makes me think of childhood. nice work.
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
i love that last part, quite delectable overall in that painfully anatagonizing way, hehehehehehehehhehehe...lovely poem