Reviews for Chocolate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Alex is that straight friend every gay guy secretly (not-so-secretly) wants in their lives. I'll take 2 Alexs with a side of Aiden to go please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! Great job |
![]() ![]() Hey. Listen, I'm a sixteen year old gay guy living in the UK, and I'm in the closet, except to my younger brother. "Chocolate", "Don't Ask, Don't Tell" and "If you don't, don't" have really helped me start working up the courage to come out to my parents and friends. I don't know how they'll react, but I'd rather be open with them, than hiding this from them. I want to say thank you for writing these wonderful stories and helping me along. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was such an amazing story Guess I was so lucky today to wander around and found your fantastic fic I really really really enjoyed it Thanks for sharing it with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was awesome, a lot of my middle school drama came from trying to stay in the closet instead of coming out to everyone. There really isn't all that much I would change. maybe expanding on some things here and there but either way, awesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a great story. I never read the other stories to this because I thought there wasn't one. But this story was so great I had to. The characters were pretty realistic too. They are extremly adorable too. Alex,Steven, and the rest of the gang were awesome. Loved the fact they weren't high schoolers either. Most stories are.. On to read more of your stories. -Katerina |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another beautiful written slash fic. I'm so glad I found this. :). Well I have to say, I kinda disliked how Steven and Aiden's relationship went, it was so fast, but yet it's still a beautiful pairing AND a beautiful story so I guess it's okay. :) Oh I also loved how you used the age 14 for the characters. I'm 13 and I think this is brilliant. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm in eighth grade and no one I know would do anything that has been portrayed in this story, I expected they were seniors or juniors! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alex and Ginny are the best :D 3 they stand up for Aiden and Steven and dont care if theyre gay or not, and they help them when Melanie and Brandon are being bastards : lmao i love the part where Ginny starts slapping Brandon in the previous chapter ... it just made my day :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww Steven and Aiden are so adorable alone and together 3 :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() WAIT! They're in eighth grade? I thought they were freshman in high school. Wow, I feel like an idiot... Lol xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't read the first one bacause I don't like het so I hope im not too confused |
![]() ![]() ![]() im really glad you put that 'you're only in eighth grade" comment in there because truthfully i was confused as to what grade they were in and how old they were. the way you make them seem is alot older but nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Superb! Amazing! Fantastic! Endearing! I -hmph- bow down to you and you co-colaborater! My heart goes out to the writer(s) of Chocolate and Sweethearts and I shall forever be a fan (though I'm stubborn, so don't tell anyone) Thank you for being amazing, The Grand Authoress |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! :) I liked how the characters weren't automatically 16 and there weren't loads of arguments and stuff. I was realistic and sweet. -grins- |