Reviews for Chocolate
AngelCastiel chapter 6 . 8/23/2015
Alex is that straight friend every gay guy secretly (not-so-secretly) wants in their lives. I'll take 2 Alexs with a side of Aiden to go please.
joslynn.keller chapter 21 . 8/14/2014
I loved it! Great job
Anon chapter 21 . 3/22/2014
Hey. Listen, I'm a sixteen year old gay guy living in the UK, and I'm in the closet, except to my younger brother. "Chocolate", "Don't Ask, Don't Tell" and "If you don't, don't" have really helped me start working up the courage to come out to my parents and friends. I don't know how they'll react, but I'd rather be open with them, than hiding this from them. I want to say thank you for writing these wonderful stories and helping me along.
Orkideh chapter 21 . 11/17/2013
That was such an amazing story
Guess I was so lucky today to wander around and found your fantastic fic
I really really really enjoyed it
Thanks for sharing it with us!
A. Wood chapter 21 . 1/17/2013
This story was awesome, a lot of my middle school drama came from trying to stay in the closet instead of coming out to everyone. There really isn't all that much I would change. maybe expanding on some things here and there but either way, awesome story
Katerina The Von chapter 21 . 3/19/2012
This was such a great story. I never read the other stories to this because I thought there wasn't one. But this story was so great I had to.

The characters were pretty realistic too. They are extremly adorable too. Alex,Steven, and the rest of the gang were awesome.

Loved the fact they weren't high schoolers either. Most stories are..

On to read more of your stories.

PolarPurple chapter 20 . 3/18/2012
Another beautiful written slash fic. I'm so glad I found this. :).

Well I have to say, I kinda disliked how Steven and Aiden's relationship went, it was so fast, but yet it's still a beautiful pairing AND a beautiful story so I guess it's okay. :)

Oh I also loved how you used the age 14 for the characters. I'm 13 and I think this is brilliant.

ALittleLunatic chapter 17 . 2/5/2012
I'm in eighth grade and no one I know would do anything that has been portrayed in this story, I expected they were seniors or juniors!
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 16 . 5/21/2011
Alex and Ginny are the best :D 3

they stand up for Aiden and Steven and dont care if theyre gay or not, and they help them when Melanie and Brandon are being bastards :

lmao i love the part where Ginny starts slapping Brandon in the previous chapter ... it just made my day :D
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 8 . 5/21/2011
awww Steven and Aiden are so adorable alone and together 3 :D
LateNightTurtle chapter 17 . 11/8/2010
WAIT! They're in eighth grade? I thought they were freshman in high school. Wow, I feel like an idiot... Lol xD
jag finns inte chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
I didn't read the first one bacause I don't like het so I hope im not too confused
lunasea chapter 17 . 7/9/2010
im really glad you put that 'you're only in eighth grade" comment in there because truthfully i was confused as to what grade they were in and how old they were. the way you make them seem is alot older but nice.
Lazy Bo bazy chapter 21 . 5/15/2010
Superb! Amazing! Fantastic! Endearing!

I -hmph- bow down to you and you co-colaborater! My heart goes out to the writer(s) of Chocolate and Sweethearts and I shall forever be a fan (though I'm stubborn, so don't tell anyone)

Thank you for being amazing,

The Grand Authoress
FakeFortune chapter 20 . 5/9/2010
I loved it! :) I liked how the characters weren't automatically 16 and there weren't loads of arguments and stuff. I was realistic and sweet. -grins-
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