Reviews for Chocolate
Green Eyes chapter 14 . 12/29/2006
And i wasn't disappointed...

I'm really looking forward to the presentation- do we get to see it? I'm quite interested to see the coming out too. Once again, as always, an interesting chapter- that was quite a fight!
Green Eyes chapter 13 . 12/29/2006
This is fabulous- I think the presentation is a wonderful nidea. It makes this different from all the hundreds of other slash fics out there- I'm impressed. Can't remember if I've reviewd before- if i haven't, i'm sorry. I also think you have built up some quite believable characters and i'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
lalalalelelel chapter 13 . 12/29/2006
I've been reading this story for a whil, and for some reason, have never reviewed. I like it and like the crazy drama rama of the last few chapters. :-)
total vintage chapter 13 . 12/28/2006
This is getting really good. Melina is a bitch! She shouldn't have kissed Steven like that! I'm just glad Steven was smart enough to pull away. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon. : D

xoxo

Ashley
dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 13 . 12/28/2006
poor guy
Kian chapter 13 . 12/28/2006
I can't help but think that there's something off about Alex...

I maybe wrong but I think He LIKES Aiden that way...
Becca Szym chapter 13 . 12/27/2006
AGH! UPDATE! I'm gonna go cry now.. I Love it... it's amazing.. wow.. *cries in corner*
dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 12 . 12/26/2006
aw
dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 11 . 12/19/2006
i love the documentry
Lush Mellifluence chapter 3 . 12/19/2006
Okay, its official, Alex is AWESOME.

“Yeah, it was sort of inevitable. And [Alex] hugged me after I told him.”

That sweet, sweet boy. Sigh. I always end up falling for straight boys anyway.

Affectionately,

Jake
Lush Mellifluence chapter 2 . 12/19/2006
You write very theatrically. Its as though a movie is playing in my head as I read. Very cool.

Again, Alex is SUPER! I love him to death. He's so caring, and wants only what's best for his best gay buddy.

Oh, and I really liked how Alex is like Steven's mind vocalized. His explanation to Steven as to why he's acting shaken was really great.

Warm regards,

Jake
Lush Mellifluence chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
Alex is adorable. He's such a great guy! I wish my straight friends were that helpful! Although, they really enjoy West Hollywood. Hahaha. Supportive straight guys are definitely the best. I think I'm in love with Alex. Hahaha! Sigh.

Well, I'm gonna read on. :)

Oh, and I'm loving your dialogue. I think you'd make a splendid playwright.

Cordially,

Jake
total vintage chapter 11 . 12/19/2006
I loved it. Actually i love every chapter but whatever hehe.
mookyjoo chapter 10 . 12/17/2006
It was better than alright.

It was perfect.

Oh and Melina was annoying! gr *slaps her* Lol, joke.

Well, keep up the good work.

CHeers, and MERRY CHRISTMAS!
12pinkroses chapter 10 . 12/14/2006
It's amazing, V. Really, really awesome.
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