Reviews for Chocolate
dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 10 . 12/12/2006
i like the little speach a gave tehre
SokPuppet chapter 10 . 12/12/2006
:) I love aiden, he's great.

We did interviews like that foir our Gay Straight Alliance in school to stop all the uhh.. homophobia. It was pretty cool! Better yet, it worked :D

Awesome Chapter!

Please update again soon!
Uadea U Ja chapter 10 . 12/11/2006
I liked the old chapter 9 a lot in terms of plot development, but this new set-up works well too.
NothingtoLoose09 chapter 10 . 12/11/2006
Very good chapter. I loved the end of it.
x account closed x chapter 9 . 12/11/2006
hohum.

i liked them both.

but this seems to fit a whole lot more
dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 9 . 12/6/2006
haha
Esquirella chapter 9 . 12/6/2006
Ack! Poor Aiden! I feel bad for Steven too, but Aiden's got to be hidden in his closet too? That's not easy for an out and proud guy.
mookyjoo chapter 9 . 12/6/2006
Hey there. I found this story while surfing (due to boredom) and I'm so glad I did! It's amazing,yeah!

Now Chapter 9 is fine. Nothing choppy. Although I kinna found some mistakes...

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"I am so not stable," Aiden concluded...

" ... " Aiden replied ...

I think that it should've been Steven concluded, and Alex replied.

Again, I might be wrong.

Keep up the good work, and I hope you update soon :D You're doing a fantastic job!
12pinkroses chapter 9 . 12/6/2006
It's not crappy! I think you should know that there are some typos, but it's still understandable and whatever, so it's not like it really matters. It was pretty good! It stinks that Aiden managed to mess up what could have been a really good opportunity but...that's what guys do, isn't it? :) Again, it really IS NOT CRAPPY! Love ya!

J
Shindo chapter 9 . 12/5/2006
*sigh* wow that was so nice... I read all the chapters so fast cause it was so hawt. XD I like your story so much ~.~ WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!~ I just got addicted to another story T.T;; Well, knowing that this is so HOT WHAT WILL AIDEN DO? AH WRITE MORE THIS IS KILLING ME well THANKS SO FAR I'LL BE CHECKING EVERY SINGLE DAY!

Seriously, good job!
Uadea U Ja chapter 9 . 12/5/2006
I really enjoy the story. The last chapter was good even with all the choppy-ness and such
bail chapter 8 . 12/4/2006
Aww, how cute. Steven wouldn't go because Aiden wouldn't be there. They are so cute together.

More soon?
12pinkroses chapter 8 . 12/3/2006
MEP! CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE...ok. Done. :)

J
NothingtoLoose09 chapter 8 . 12/3/2006
Update!
x account closed x chapter 8 . 12/3/2006
that last line was cute :)

aw.

i love this story, it doesn't surprise me that there are so many hits for it at all. just a shame more people don't leave a review or two for it :/. oh well ya know?

anyway. i love the fact that almost everytime i log on there is an update! you deserve a cookie or something for that :p
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