Reviews for Every time
Keree chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
I somehow missed this poem when going through your poetry.

huh...

Anyhow just going on a reading basis...this isn't one of your best pieces but better than what I've with other people.

~Keree

P.S. Hey! You need to come back and post some more poetry for me to review. Please.
ShadowFane chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
Aww! Cute! Lol. I loved this one too. Great job!

SF
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Cute poem. The last line is adorable. Good luck with poetry and life.

~Twilight Starr~
meg chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
very sweet
harshness of life chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
hey heyz! aw...so moving manz. we all kno hu da inspiration was aye? *lifts eyebrows* lolz neways i like its! WRITE MORE! bye byes
FireSign16 chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Short and sweet; I like it.
Jamie chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
awsome poem its cool...your so talented lolz...so who is your special someone? you gotta tell me PLZ
kris chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
hey, nice poem bel, good work :)
lisagal chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
omg ur first poem posted up! YAY! go girl! lol... well gud work! and keep at adding different techniques! lol
TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Congratulations on your first post, and here's some feedback. It's a pretty simple, common type of poem, and though I'm not too fond of this type of poetry, I actually think it's kind of cute. I'd expand on it, perhaps add a little more to it, but even so, it's a rather ordinary poem. It's short, it's simple, and it's a very well-used concept, though most ideas are these days.