|Reviews for Every time|
| Keree chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
I somehow missed this poem when going through your poetry.
Anyhow just going on a reading basis...this isn't one of your best pieces but better than what I've with other people.
P.S. Hey! You need to come back and post some more poetry for me to review. Please.
| ShadowFane chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
Aww! Cute! Lol. I loved this one too. Great job!
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Cute poem. The last line is adorable. Good luck with poetry and life.
| meg chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
| harshness of life chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
hey heyz! aw...so moving manz. we all kno hu da inspiration was aye? *lifts eyebrows* lolz neways i like its! WRITE MORE! bye byes
| FireSign16 chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Short and sweet; I like it.
| Jamie chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
awsome poem its cool...your so talented lolz...so who is your special someone? you gotta tell me PLZ
| kris chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
hey, nice poem bel, good work :)
| lisagal chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
omg ur first poem posted up! YAY! go girl! lol... well gud work! and keep at adding different techniques! lol
| TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Congratulations on your first post, and here's some feedback. It's a pretty simple, common type of poem, and though I'm not too fond of this type of poetry, I actually think it's kind of cute. I'd expand on it, perhaps add a little more to it, but even so, it's a rather ordinary poem. It's short, it's simple, and it's a very well-used concept, though most ideas are these days.