Reviews for This is My Love
DevilWorship chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
The last couplet was by far the best. Quite truthful. One of those things you think of when looking at the glittered and drawn up quotes for myspace. Very nice.
ophelia chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
dang...that was deep..im also reading ur other stories soo please update soonn..the next door neighbor one and that one with jay...
Teller of Dreams chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
Amazing, beautifully written. Funny, at points, as well.

(Like here - If I can't have you, no one ever will.

So stop fighting, and keep Goddamn still.)

I don't know why that was funny, it just is.

Again, eerie and amazing!
somuchformyhappyending chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Kinda creepy...like, stalkerish, but it was VERY well written. Even though you planned for it to come out differently, I think this was the best it could've come out. Very good job! keep writing!
NurseDelilah chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Oh wow...this is perfect. I really enjoyed this...such a sadistic transcend. How sickenly sweet this person seems...you did a very good job. You kept good meter and I like the rhyming. I personally have difficulty with that XD
Twinkle Star Bell chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
wow! I loved it. I don't usually read poems but this looked good just as I read the first line I got hoked. I love love loved it and it actually creeped me out. Very good!