Reviews for Crow's Feet
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
Interesting images, the conflict between the negative and the positive language here. You've got some great lines here. My favorite was:

But then I wondered if she really knew what it felt like,

With the crow's feet pinned around her eyes,

and the sad crease of her mouth.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
The descriptions are wonderful, the feeling perfect. You woke my eyes up.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
"The flavor of the retrospect?", is quite unique. The situation created is truly enhanced by the specific and distinct description. "I wallow here-like the diseased buffalo,", for example really gives a broader picture than saying stagnant or vacant or any other abstract feeling that you could have written in its place. Very thought provoking. Great write.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
so, so green.
ronshaberry chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Aww... I love how you write so much. You're just cranking 'em out, huh? You make genius seem easy... -_- Gawsh. Wonderful. Again, the prose poem thing going on! Even though this is in poem form. Yeah. I think it'd be good as a prose poem.