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WyrdWolf chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
I think this could be a neat chapter idea, if you keep with the play premise. This one kind of reminded me of that song, 'Don't Care Anymore,' by Rob Thomas, I think. you think that's devil music, too? _~

oxytocin chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
I love the ending. It holds such potential for the poem. The subject is quite engrossing and carefully written. Good job!