Reviews for Weight
MizSphinx chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
hey this was beautiful...I could total picture this lady and that's what hooks me. I'm guessing you're trying to depict a mother...? The last two lines gives me this opinion. Great job, I really liked this!

Rina-Lyn Bae chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
Oy. Tis wonderful. Very true, very poignant, very insightful, and last but by no means least: very well written! I forgot powerful. And beautiful. And many more adjectives.

Meg Schick chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
This poem is awesome. It really catches the girl's emotions, I know them all too well. Well done.

Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
Good poem, I think you caught the essence of bearing a cross well here, nice one.

Ajna chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
This is going to sound somewhat arrogant, but sometimes that's how I feel about myself. Beautiful poem; it's going on my favorites. :]