I just thought I'd let you know that this story kept me up from a bit after midnight until 9:00 am reading, with naught but a two-hour break to watch a movie on TV, and still reading during commercials. Then I finished it tonight, nearly as soon as I woke up from crashing. In short, amazing story! I loved it! The writing is superb, the characterization excellent, the sexual tension great, and the wit at times scathing (that's a good thing). I will definitely be checking out the rest of your stories, and they'd -better- be as good, or you'll be hearing from me. :-D

One thing: I do wish we'd gotten to read about Aleda's first hunt as an actual hunter. I dearly hope that will be covered in another story?

I am so sorry it took me so long to read this!

But here goes: a simply wonderful ending to a magnificent story. One of the best stories I've read period, especially since the whole idea is something new and unique; not overused.

So wonderful job!

It's really, really...well...EXTREMELY hard to imagine a "better" version than this one. I really enjoyed this story. Some of the best. And I don't say that lightly. ;)

(I would buy 2 copies of it should you ever publish it: one first edition for collection and one to read over and over and over again.)

~Bri

Your story is fantastic, I just finished reading the whole thing and I am impressed. It was more like reading a good book, than just a story! I love it!

I loved this story...

Nate falling off the stage is so great, he deserves it for being such a jerk.

So this isn't the end rt? I mean we get more... Pls?

I loved the ending, it was just so (for lack of a better word) perfect. It was a pleasure reading your work.

i am so very mad that this is the last chapter. i never wanted the story to end. although i am mad my sadness out wieghs it. i loved loved loved the story. oh well its time to say good bye.

aww...

you almost made me cry in this chapter! first of sadness then of happiness...

all i have to say: congratulations. you stuck it out and did an amazing job!

i look forward to reading the revised version. also... i don't know how you feel about short stories, but i think that a short story on ryan and aledas adventures would be very appropriate. just a thought.

toodledoo dear! once more, congrats... now if only i was more like you and can finally get my own story off the ground!

Wonderful story..seriously! I wish it would get published so I could buy it../ Perfect ending. And what Nate did just enforced my opinion on how idiotic he is, XDD Oohh, this probably sounds all dorky, but I got all excited when I saw my name at the end..lol.

Wow. I just read about 15 chapters in a row and this is just getting more and more amazing.

GO AFTER HIM ALEDA! GO AFTER HIM!

ok... so now im speaking to the characters (you know you're crazy when...) good job on the calling... u did a good job! what inspired u to it?

anyway... good on you, lass!

i found a few spelling mistakes (or well... awkward sentences) so just make sure to keep an eye on those! )

AAh! Terrible, terrible... you just had to leave me in suspense!

Ok, 1. LOVE the calling ceremony. it was really beautifully described. I like that all the family was there and its so cool you gave them 'names'. It felt as if I were watching from that beach as they had their party. That's awesome.

2. Ryan left! He id promise but he finally said 'I love You', dont think Aleda's realized it yet. lol

and all this 'light' and her being able to 'see' everyone, I can picture it, how she must be feeling, so you did good with the writing.

Cant wait for the next chapter. )

OH MY!... MUCH better chapter... i am quite happy u decided to go with what u wanted to do... it certainly shows in ur quality of writing

now, i would like to apologize if i am one of the people that was pressuring you into writing something u didnt want... i just want to make something clear (if a bit late).. this is YOUR story,... u call the shots, u make it happen... i am here to read and review and to hopefully help improve it through my comments, but nothing more... i dont ever want u to feel like you "owe" me to have the story go as i want just because im reading/reviewing... ok?

now that thats out of the way... i am happy with this chapter and im glad u decided to take the last one out... this fits the story better )... i am somewhat sad that the story is coming to an end, though... but all good things must end right?

i just thought of something, so ill share it with u... u have the story under "supernatural/drama" but i feel like the story has a romance the main (or at least very strong) focus... with supernatural following it... so maybe it would be good to change the genre or w/e to better represent the story? just my thoughts... )

congrats on this chapter!

Sad to hear the chapter got cut when I kinda liked the whole idea of them going to prom since Ryan handt been to one. It was a nice thing for him to be able to 'enjoy'.

Come along to find this chapter and I totally see why you changed it. Wish Talia had made an appearance though. That would have been hilarious to see and Mara with her Pyrotechnics...

Good writing.