Reviews for Madrugada
Kaoz chapter 60 . 1/18/2008
Well, shit. that was- the weirdest break up ever. then again i never did the break up thing well, sort of just avoided them n they got the picture.

cant wait to find out how they got bound.
urbanfictionalist chapter 60 . 1/18/2008
i really dont like nate. hes always blaming aleda on something its not even fair. but i love that she and ryan are together now and her father needs to stop eing so over protective. But i liked the chapter and i cant wait for the next
Lionesscouer chapter 59 . 1/16/2008
YES! Finally! Whoo ho ...

Loved it loved it loved it ...

'bout time Ryan did something about his feelings.. : )
ammisan chapter 59 . 1/12/2008

About damn time. I've been waiting for these two to get together ever since you let on that they had the hots for each other. What's gonna be interesting now is Nate's reaction...

Well, that and her father's.
dani-sgga chapter 59 . 1/11/2008



good chapter! )... it was well done... i just have one little thing to say. have u mentioned zak in the story at all before? if u have and i dont remember this, never mind my next comment... if u havent, then i suggest u do... in some chapter just in passing. this is just so that when a person comes to zaki (or any new -yet minor- character, really), they dont feel like he just appeared out of no where when it was convinient, u know?

anyway... thats all! congrats on the kiss! FINALLY!

oh... im going to try my luck at this. i say that aleda becomes a hunter and when she does she wants to go out to explore the world and see new places/test her new abilities/get a little closer to ryan (insert perverted eye brow waggle now)... but her dad is still being over protective-so it was a more "ur my daughter so u cant do anything dangerous" thing all along not a "ur not a hunter so blah blah" one... and she just runs of with ryan... AND aledas mom is the one that takes over mikes position... but thats just what i think! did i get any of it right?
kaoz chapter 59 . 1/11/2008
Ha! like i said. A date! they may not call it a date but that is so a date! lol

cant wait till next week. n Aleda, if the girl goes back to Nate after this then Ryan should so leave her. That's enough w the playing games for her...
Sparrow's Song chapter 59 . 1/11/2008
Aw, thats sweet. So I guess Nate's finally out of the picture, huh? Lol. Wow, I actually forgot it was friday too until I checked my e-mail!

The story seems like its getting closer to the end, is it? You should so publish it...I'd buy it. 0

And also, sorry for my lack of reviews lately, I'll try harder!
urbanfictionalist chapter 59 . 1/11/2008
yay, im so happy. But i have a questions what going to happen with her boyfriend i forget his name. Ryan and Aleda finally got there feeling out in the open. well not verbally but im so happy i cant wait for the next chapter. u put a smile on my face. I wonder how her father is going to react to this. well until the next chapter. I hope u update very very soon
ammisan chapter 58 . 1/8/2008
Bow-chicka wowt-wow

Great chapter. I am most definitely looking forward to seeing Aleda get back to her parent's house.
kaoz chapter 58 . 1/4/2008
Yay! there was killing, finally. N now a date w Ryan... cant wait to see what Nate has to say about that.
dani-sgga chapter 58 . 1/4/2008
soo... i didn't really think this chapter was insane... u did good, even with sleep deprivation . however, i did notice some spelling mistakes, not many... worry not! just... mixing up letters so that new words that shouldn't be there suddenly are...

apart from that... this chapter was good, though i find maybe not as detailed as i would have liked. going back through it, i can't really think where more detail would be fitting, though. perhaps in how aleda is feeling... i can imagine this is a big step for her... she just completely rebelled against her father, is going to go hunting in daylight and everyone knows it and she clearly claimed which side she's in... ryan. and talking of him, in the last chapter she had some what of an argument with him but in this one it is completely forgotten... we ALL know that she likes ryan (and the little flirty/banter thing they have going on proves it) but aleda is yet to realize so... i would think she would be AT LEAST a little sullen or something

oh and i finally figured out the whole zeus thing! i feel so silly, i should have known right away but it took talia pointing out she calls aleda "leda" for me to realize it! anyway... nice use of greek mythology ;) have to ask though, did u name aleda aleda because u wanted to use this since the beginning or did u realize after u had named her aleda that it would work?

PS- u are now under one of my fav stories ;)
urbanfictionalist chapter 57 . 12/30/2007
loved the chapter. im proud of leda shes goin against her father about hunting. yay! cant wait for the next
ammisan chapter 57 . 12/28/2007
Bloody brilliant.
kaoz chapter 57 . 12/28/2007
Oh Yeah! walk out on Papi n go hunt w ur new boy toy. ) So i have till next friday for the fight huh?

U know I dont think uve ever described Ryan, i didnt know he had long hair in the first place...
ammisan chapter 56 . 12/26/2007
Oh sweet christ jesus if there is any decency in your heart you will update soon. You will you will you will.

Awesome stuff. PLEASE tell me Nate is getting taken down a peg or eight.
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