The vent? omg she's friggin nuts! in a really cool way. THere's not way u cant love Talia.

So have a happy holiday n hopefully we'll c u next friday w another post.

u smart smart cookie! when i first read that this chapter was from talias pov... i was a bit disappointed BUT i bite my words now! it was amazing that it was! hence the smart cookieness...! it gave a fresh new look to the whole ryan-aleda situation, so major props missy!

nothing to say about this chapter... good job!

i want more i want ryan and leda to be together. i dont like nate he makes her feel bad. i cant wait for the next chapter

Woa, hey! Not gone for ever rt?

n y the heck is Aleda going back to the dumbutt? Poor Ryan's getting jerked around... Sometimes I just wanne get the girl n shake her till she's got some sense.

Good chapter, err continuation of the chapter. )

Stupid, stupid, stupid Aleda. Nates always been stupid but this is surprising..o. Who in there right mind would pick whiny nate over ryan? I do hope everything works out in the end. )Ick, and Ryan was completly spot on about fast food...its disgusting.

Well, I hope your next update is longer.

And please dont stop writing. :)

aw poor ryan, nate is not a good boyfriend you dont put all the blame on someone u like. and leda right its only been five months gosh nate is such a jerk im rooting for ryan

Dang, so I wait till next friday for the rest of this... Ok, I can wait but just make it longer. I was in done in like five minutes.

Aww, they are so cute. Will u b throwing in some explanation on what is 2b a hunter n all that comes w/it? That would b interesting.

it was a good chapter i loved it. i see that ryan and leda are getting more close in there relationship, and what happened to nate? i mean i kind of figured that he would atleast try to call or come and see her to try to figure out what happened.

yay! angry faja! lol good job with the whole punishment/crazy father is still going strong! he's so mean... I LOVE IT! D

on another note... i love ryan and aleda... hehe... for some reason i don't expect hunters would give their blood so readily... yet how many times has he healed aleda with his blood? even when it wasn't anything THAT serious (i.e. a scrape while training or when she bit through her lip)... and now this? he just did it to "experiment"... yea right! there's an undeniable feeling of... closeness... every time aleda receives his blood, and i'm sure he feels it too! hehe! absolutely adore their moments... ryan is really so silly

so leda and ryan are gettin kind of cozy there. poor nate...i like ryan better though. i loved the story so far and i cant wait for the next update

hi! i've ben reading your story for a while and well... i think it's long overdue for me to review!

first things first, i really like how the story is evolving... it flows nicely... you haven't made ryan start liking aleda all of the sudden or vice versa... there have been no major personality switches or anything of the sort. so props on that ) good work! However, I also found the beginning to the story a bit slow, kind of dragged... perhaps it's because aleda was so worried about her teenage problems or ryan was very one-sided, i don't know... i certainly don't feel like this anymore. i think you have transformed the story to something quite good! i just wanted to let you know so that when u revise it after it's completely done, you can keep it in mind.

now.. for these past chapters... my biggest problem has been with aleda, i have to admit. i love her character but lately there have been things that just don't seem to add up. let me explain, when fer father grounded her she got angry and apart from a comment here on there about her goofy father worried about his pregnant wife, she hasn't said much else in regards to the grounding and how angry she must feel about it. she can't go out at night AT ALL... and it's winter, sunset is at like 5 or 6 (or well... it is here, anyway... but i live in canada so there will probably be differences)... that means she can't even go to the movies in the afternoon if it ends before 5! no matter how laid back aleda is, i expect she would be very angry and frustrated about it... and it would show in the way she talks with her dad... u know? i know she knows he does it because he cares, but he is excessively protective and she should show more emotion, still now... about it.

the other things that doesn't add up to me with aleda is actually in this chapter. before i go back to being critical i want to THANK YOU! i've been waiting for aleda to realize ryan is so much better than nate for the longest time! it made me so happy when she called him to come pick her up! D... now, back to critical (sorry!)... i was a bit disappointed when you had aleda just leave nate like that and only go back to the table because of her coat. granted she was in shock... and reeling!... (i thought u did this quite well ;) so props!) but if she cared about nate at all, even as a friend... she would have gone back eventually... quite frankly, i expected the scene to evolve something like this: she leaves the bathroom and goes to the table and tries to explain that she can't answer, that it's too soon and it's unfair of him to expect her to agree just like that, but all the time she keeps looking at the lobby waiting for ryan to come in, and nate who has been getting more and more frustrated with aleda eventually yells why she keeps looking toward the lobby and just then... ryan walks in and aleda gets up... which is when nate blows up like u so nicely made him do! i know... super corny scene with ryan walking in as nate looks towards the lobby... but what i meant to show is that aleda in her state of shock and what not still goes back to nate because no matter what... he's still her friend and deserves an explanation.

anyway... that's all! i know i've been very critical but regardless of what it may seem like... i really DO like your story quite a lot! like it said... i think it's evolved quite well and the characters are all multi-dimensional which is nice.

keep them coming!

~dani

PS: why is the story called madrugada? it means sunrise in spanish... is there a particular reason why you have called it so?

Eep! ) HE likes her! I so knew it a dozen chapters ago. THis one was so cute now go ahead n get rid of nate will ya. or make us wait it out a bit that's cool. I'd like to see the results of her leaving w ryan...

Hey, I received your PM. Thanks for the compliment! And as for adding you- most likely yes, but as I haven't read farther than the first chapter [which doesn't give much 'supernatural-wise'] I'm going to reserve judgement.

So far it's great, and I'm utterly captivated by your Aleda! Great job. [Oh, and Mara is the exact copy of my friend, Delaney.]

-Angel

Aww, poor Ryan. I knew it. I knew Ryan liked Aleda!. Haha -smiles triumphantly-. But I didnt know Nate would propose. Is he an idiot? I'm serious.

Anyway, I'm really, really, really sorry I havent been reviewing. Its been so crazy. I havent even written anything new for a couple weeks. And our computer wasnt working there for a while. So right now, I finally took the time and read all the chapters I've missed.

Love them, as always. And keep writing! :))

ARGH. I'm SO impressed with this so far... I love the mix of normalcy and the knowledge that she most definitely is not normal... I'm dying to know what goes on with Nate, too... I'll read more when I'm not tired out of my head!

Keep Writing!

Janna X