What 'Oh'? Oh waht I wanna know I'n so lost on that one, gah!

Lol Valentines day, I didint know some one got their head lopped off... yeegh

OOh! U gotta post the next one! U gotta post the next one!

OMG I'm so hooked on this fic its not funny ne more. So what happens next?

awe man, I want to know whats going to happen next.

Aww, he made her new claws! aint he a doll.

Can't wait to see where he takes her. he's a sneaky bugger, for a guy.

no reviews yet? blasphemy. :0

anyway. brilliant, as usual. "turnabout was hilarious play" is seriously one of my favourite turns-of-phrase, like, ever, so i'm going to point out once again how much i love it.

and one day i'll show my true fangirl colours and make a set of training claws. and most likely wear them to otakon, if not canton. _

Long-time reader, first-time commenter. Or something like that. :) But I wanted to say, keep it up! You're a great writer, I love this story and can't wait for more. Madrugada is one more reason to look forward to Fridays for me. :)

Yay, finally an update n i gotta say she coulda tried to lie a little better.

the dream description was beautiful, i got to see it in my mind n that's always good.

can't wait for the next chapter n i know ure gonna send little leda out to find ryan... huge smiles on that piece.

HEy, $5 for what? And I like this chapter though maybe he was tiny bit too soft on her.

Like the way you make his accent appear. I keep hearing Ewan McGregor from 'The Island'... m.

Ooh, Aledas pissed. Ryan better Apologize...-shakes head- Aleda should dump Nate!

Can he be any more jealous? lol. this was so funny but seriously Nate is a punk and Leda is stupid for letting him talk about her that way. Has she no self respect? it should've been her smaking Nate upside the head for those stupid comments.

still, loved the chapter.

Oh, that was great! Perfect scene with Nate and Ryan. Aha, yeah, Aleda should like leave Nate...:)) But I admit, Ryan does seem to have an anger problem..o.o. But it makes his character even more fun to read.

I was just wondering. How many chapters are you planning to post, and how far along are you with the story?

The beginning is too long and full of unnecessary information. If it is not relevant to the plot line, it should be left out or just told in one or two brief sentences.

Not only that, but the beginning of a story should hint to your readers what the rest of the story will be like.

I take it Ryan doesn't like Nate all that well. I wouldn't either...p. Wow, that was cool, what Ryan did. Jeez, can you blame Aleda for being shocked, she probably thought he'd leave her for dead or something...But no, Ryans cool.

Again, another great chapter. Uptade soon..:)

Aha, Great chapter. Ha, now lizzy can stop acting like such a loser, Aleda saved her. More then she deserved, but hey, I wouldnt think anyone would deserve being one of those things meal...0.o..It was funny how Aleda acted like it was no big deal after she killed it.

Sorry I couldnt review sooner, computer and phone lines were down for awhile, although I have no idea why..0.o.

Love it. Review me please.

This is wonderful. I read about 7 chapters in a row and this is just getting more and more exciting!