Whew! Close call!

Haha! that's so perfect!

Great start!

It's interesting, reading a fictionpress story in third person. Your story is very professional and quirky.

I absolutely LOVE this story! It's kind of like this one story I'm reading! You should go check it out: Pirate of My Dreams - category: Romance - length: 50000 I think you'd love it! Thank you for bringing this story in to my life! I have been sooooo freakin BORED for the past week since I finished the Twiliight series... You should read that as well... It's a lot less stupid than everyone says it is... Actually, it is quite good. It's the movies that kind of ruined it though! The book were BEAST! Hahahaaa... The movie - as a movie - I guess was "good" but the movie as a movie based on the books? UGHHHHHGHHH! It was so OFF! I mean, I understand that you can't fit the book into 2 hours, but they could at least make the characters a bit more accurate to the book! Some of the cast were actually good actors but the script was all WRONG! Bella is supposed to be stubborn and headstrong! I don't blame the actress. The script just made Bella all wimpy and WEAK. Bella is suppose to have that powerful selfless confidence thing going for her! THE MOVIE WWAS ALL WRONGGGGGGG! Unlike this story. this story is allll right in every way! GREAT JOB! HehahehaaAa...

Your devoted reader,

Juliet

awesome! love it good job.

Oooh, such naughtiness. *wags finger mockingly*

It does rain often in the Caribbean (I live in Jamaica), but we're obviously not known for that kind of weather. Though just this past week, due to the passing hurricane, it rained almost every evening. I just so happen to prefer the rain to the sun sometimes, however.

It's the middle of the night and I'm cackling and smiling to myself like an insane person, this story was just that good Your writing style is amazingly well developed, admittedly there are one or two mistakes but nothing that would detract from the plot.

I think this is going to be a recurring comment for me but I love the guys you have in your stories! And the heroines of course, there's nothing worse than a character who sits back feeling helpless when they have a problem. Ellie is the perfect blend of independence and innocence. And Gabriel...Oh the things one could say about Gabriel (and do to him ;D)!

Now to decide if sleep is overrated or if Gabriel focused dreams merit postponing the next story to tomorrow morning. Or later today as the case may be...

Love(:

Awwwwwww!I have this huge grin on my face since the last couple of chapters, they were so adorably cute. I honest to god loved this story, it's probably my favourite out of the stories i have read of yours so far, i have plenty others to read.

I liked the plot, although it was whole cliche of girl falling for bestfriends older brother you handled it differently and AMAZINGLY, it didn't seem so ... well cliched, and i don't

think i have read many pirate and princess kind of stories, it was a refreshing change to read something like this.

Anyways, i adored both Ellie and Gabriel, especially Gabe, i thought he was really sweet you know to send gifts for her in the beggining of the story although he didn't exactly have to, it shows that even if by outer appearance he's seen as a ruthless captain, inside he's got a heart of gold, no wonder Ellie fell in love with him, who wouldn't!

And Ellie poor soul, i felt really sad for her. No one likes lonliness and she had to go through that with no choice of her own, i guess she had Bea, but she really must have felt hurt during all those holidays and birthdays when gifts and letters came to Bea but none for her. Poor girl, but hey! she has Gabe

and now Claire and Lottie, and another baby on its way!Awwwwww.

I'm really going to miss this story *sob*

Lol, how did Mr Fairfax (the name sounds familiar...it's from an Austen novel right?) get to St Lucia before Eliie and Gabriel? I'm thinking British Airways, or Ryanair if pushing it, but that's me trying to put a smile on your face. Planes didn't exist back then.

So just how did he get there so fast?

Yah u make good stories, although I felt this one was a bit cheesy towards the end.

That was one great story! I love it!

This was very good

That was a wonderful introduction. :)