beautiful intro.

very to the point which really is just fine.

I'm so exicited for this new story! Great start :)

love it

I LOVE this so far, Clavie! Fantastic beginning! I WANT MORE! Soon! :D

This is great!

Love Katty.

O. This looks interesting. Poor Ellie. I hope she finds her happy ending. I can't wait to read more. Update soon please. (though you always do)

hahaha charles townsend charlie's angels :)

Aw! Another story! :D *Happy Dance*

Soo excited :D :D :D :D :D I can't live on reading only the evencort's series :D New Juicy plot

Love it as always

Update again son :P

I love the start of this. It sounds like it will be another excellent story. I love that Ellie is getting in trouble. It shows that she has some spirit.

Well, I'm curious about this! Can't wait to read more...Plus it helps soothing my sadness coz troubles with heels' end! :)

Sounds like it's going to be brilliant! Update soon! Oh, and I loved the ending to trouble with high heels, v. sweet.

great begining :)

but you never really described how any of them are.. i ws hoping to know what bea and gabriel were like some more

Interesting and well written. Only, "And then Bea had met Lieutenant Charles Townsend and fell in love and married, and moved all the way to the Caribbean… And Ellie was left alone again.

She couldn’t expect Bea’s brother to remember her now, and that nearly broke her heart." could be put into the same paragraph.

Her life's so sad, but soon to get better I hope? Bring on Captain Beefcake!

nice start