Reviews for Alexandria
greenGalilee chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
This one made me smile even wider.

No, really. What are you still doing on fictionpress? You should be out amazing everyone with these lovely words!
Aisling Grey chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
Quite lovely poem. It makes me long to go back to Egypt. Ironic how much a short poem can have such an impact on a person.
eldrin chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
"Plaintive reeds" is beautiful personification. These reeds outside of Alexandria seem an exellent choice of hiding places for this poem.
felicia13 chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Ok. Because I'm me, I thought of Dora the Explorer when I read this. That isn't necessarily a bad thing, because I really like Dora the Explorer. It also goes to show you how I am.

Other than that, it was tres excellante! "Bathe the stars" is a cool little image in my head and Alexandria is also a cool thing. Like, Egypt Alexandria, or Rome Alexandria?

Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Subtle splashes of liquefied imagery. Nice.