Reviews for Promise
GinzzzRoxxx chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
PS: tack on what WickedMe said into my review somewhere. I feel what that person said pretty much summed up what I thought.
GinzzzRoxxx chapter 12 . 6/17/2010
Thank god she didn't go for James. I would've turned into wolverine and raged all around this b#*ch.

Cheaters & flies are my pet peeves.
I Murder on Impulse chapter 12 . 1/10/2009

Ngoc1231 chapter 12 . 8/18/2008
Well this was a ending that I wasn't hoping for. It is kinda crazy that she got with Brandon. But still, when he first appeared, the first thing I thought "ohh ohh hot guy D". So yeah.

Great story!

awaiting.rain chapter 12 . 6/7/2007
she got engaged to a guy she had known for like 3 days?

very unrealistic.

laura is so undeveloped.

as are the rest of the characters.

and you need to work on your punctuation.

its an alright story, just needs more work.
xjennnny chapter 12 . 5/2/2007
thsi is so good. i loved it. ad ur other sotire stoo. ]] do a sequel? maybe...please...about james! and hav all the other charatters come bak ans james try to win over laura...mayb? I JSUT LOVE THESE CHARATERS! OR U COULD CONTINUE THE SEQUEL TO TAMING THE PLAYBOY! :D
MountainStream chapter 12 . 3/25/2007
um, its an ok story, it needs to be filled out a lot more with a much more realistic time line. Its too quick and some things are just arent plausible.

The first thing that springs into my head is the cafe, why not have them have their little conversation while deciding what to order, then have James go to the counter to order while she quickly pops out from under the table and hurridly introduces brandon to her brother, hence forging the aquaintance between those two.

All in all this story needs a lot more character and relationship development and a few more chapters to make an average story into a great plot and a grabbing read.
pop-yur-fcukn-collar chapter 12 . 2/12/2007
aw! yaya! she got with brandon... i was actually expecting her to get with james when i first read the summary but i'm happy she didn't! he's an ass! nice work.
Kaede Kitsurani chapter 12 . 2/7/2007
Aw, cute! I don't want you to end it!
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 12 . 2/7/2007
cute ending
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 11 . 2/7/2007
naningxoxo chapter 12 . 2/6/2007
woah... that was actually pretty good... it made me smile a lot... and at first i was confused on who was the love interest, especially when she said that she felt nothing with brandon and her pulse still raced with james... but now i know the ending... although it was a bit short, i did enjoy... and now... i am off to study for a damn test tomorrow... damn...
arouralai chapter 12 . 2/5/2007
YAY good for he's so adorable...time to go read some more of your stories!

Anne Onymus chapter 12 . 2/5/2007
Yay! Happy ending :)
Anne Onymus chapter 11 . 2/5/2007








PS: Thank YOU for writting this story :P
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