“While the other one I met when I feel into the duck pound just recently who is currently pretending to be my boyfriend.”

“You’ve got yourself in a right old pickle.”

“Yea- oh shit!”

PRICELESS! Haha, I LOVE this! Please post soon!

NICE!

very nice! i am loving this story...i wanna kno who she is with!

update soon plz!

~lai

heh nice update again ) it's ending soon? *worries* hope it isn't a "i-can't-finish-this-story-since-i've-so-much-other-stuff-going-on-in-my-life" decision like so many other authors whose stories i've been reading!

that said, i do want to see who she ends up with ) Keep it comin'!

great chapter! omg i don't know which guy i like better. update soon!

xD Sarah's a big help, isn't she? Anyway, I'll see you next chapter. .

very nice! O and Merry Christmas

The chapter was good although there were a few grammatical errors and times where you used the wrong form of a word like their for there. But I really like your story, it's a really good idea.

nice update ) liked the funny bit about the squirrels. did you do this in a rush though? quite a few slip-ups in the language!

great chapter! Merry Christmas!

I love this story, but the editting on chapter eight was atrocious. 'There' where should be 'they're' and the like. Plus the punctuation is off; there are a lot of periods where question marks should be, and there's barely a comma to speak of- that makes for difficult reading and run-ons. I suggest you look the chapter over again and repost it. And before you get all crestfallen; remember that I do like the story! The execution on this particular chapter was just a little poor is all.

Not sure that I liked this chapter. Laura is acting strange. She should have told Brandon that she was bringing James with her.

he does sound kinda pefect. update soon!

I DO love Brandon (as I MIGHT have mentioned prior :P ) as I also love this story. Keep up the good work!

-Anne

hello (o and i'm also known as anonymous reviewer lai by the way) that was so good! brandon's a sweetheart!