|Reviews for The Graveyard Tales|
| Guest chapter 54 . 9/23/2016
You did a great job telling this sprawling story. I enjoyed it a lot. That being said, I feel like some of the instances and characters were a little too unrealistic. Specifically, when matt is saying horrible things about Jake and Sara and their kids. As a father and husband, I would have done everything in my power to destroy matt at that point, especially given the circumstances. Also, you used the same phrases a lot, like "eat a gun" for example. Great imagry, just try to change it up a bit. I bet if you fine tuned, you could turn this into a series of books or novellas or something and have a nice sized fan base. All in all, great fucking read, my friend!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
Hi are you the gypsg_love in wattpad? You have the same story..
| DarkfictionComa chapter 1 . 11/27/2015
Fantastic narrator voice. Looking forward to reading more.
| Guest chapter 54 . 4/2/2015
| Guest chapter 52 . 2/13/2015
Wait I'm confused. Why is matt back after so many chapters? Last chapter, it was him who was with addie... but I think you meant michael
| Kenny Scott Halj chapter 54 . 1/12/2015
This is an awesome story. Please tell me where to find the rest of it. Really need closure! Thank you!
| Unhippocampe chapter 6 . 11/3/2014
Truly enjoyable! I do have some feeling of horror reading you - and I look forward to read more of this story and others. Thanks a lot!
Only one thing: the likelihood of reaching the children just as they are about to be taken by the zombies. Some triggering event is lacking to explain why they are in jeopardy exactly at this moment. Maybe it could be something like: (a) the bus crew arrives and hesitate before the zombies; (b) the children get out to reach their parents, the grandparents try to help them and get eaten alive; (c) then the children are in peril.
In fact, another timing thing leaves me somewhat skeptical: the arrival of the bus crew just as the journalists get out of their building. Some more timing justification would make it better.
But it's good! I hope to read you again.
| Guest chapter 54 . 9/12/2014
I love it! Great READ! can we get a part two to this? i want to know how things go with Addie!
| Guest chapter 42 . 9/12/2014
I am loving this story! It would have felt more "real" if you had described the charactors-what they looked like, personalities. You can visualize the story better that way.
| That Guy chapter 6 . 5/17/2014
Wait, Greg's dead.
And he's not Sara's husband.
Fix the typos, please!
| Me chapter 53 . 12/3/2013
This was really good. However, the random Chinese or Japanese or whatever they were symbols REALLY made it harder to read. I definitely suggest you do something about them.
| Darren chapter 15 . 11/13/2013
Brilliant writing, reminds me of stephan kings book the stand.
| Huh chapter 52 . 11/6/2013
Why does it have random Chinese words in it?
| ucat42 chapter 51 . 10/23/2013
| DmRobertson chapter 2 . 10/15/2013
Great story. I'm new to FP, so I'm glad to find a good writer doing horror/zombie stories. I'm writing in those genres too and it's great to see work like yours that's well written and getting reviews/followers/votes. Hope to get some too, some day! Thx for the stories.