Reviews for So I Smile
Lady Fingers chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
i love this but the part about you "having a prob" pulled me away from the piece
OhmygodCHOCOLATE chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Amazing you really gave this some true depth just don't shorten words in your stories it takes away from the feeling
Wolf's Night chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Love the poem. I'm a little confused with all of the different font changes though. Do they hold any significance for emphasis or is it a style statement? Either way it adds a nice effect to look at but the reading gets thrown off a little by it.

Anyways great poem, i liked the meaning behind it. Second to last line is definitely my favorite.
xxoh-the-possibilitiesxx chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
wow, that was great. I love how you bolded and italicized certain words. very raw emotion, and the last two lines are so so relateable.
behindstonewalls chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
ok, well i really like it, but i think instead of bolding and italicizing and such you should just let the words speak for themselves, and i think you should replace "prob" and "sad" with more powerful words, other than that its really good, keep writing!