This is a great chapter as well. I really like the way that this is turning out. I love how you can delve into human sin the way that you do. It really makes this work dark and definitely worth the read.

I really like the whole gardener and seeds thing you have going on with the devil and things of that nature. It's kind of funny to see Lucifer working at a flower shop. I think I'm going to enjoy this little story.

What a great story! I'm glad that I started reading this one. I was also recommended this work by Melissa Norvell and it looks promising.

It seems that something bad will happen to Sora then. I wonder if Lucifer will make another offer to the twin before she can plot a murder...Also I wonder about that seed growing within her.

I'll definitely check out another chapter soon! This story is just too good to resist. I'm glad Melissa Norvell reccomended you to me.

I had a feeling that it wasn' Sora. Ireally like this chapter and the fact that the devil works at a flower shop is both humorous and ironic.

I look forward to readi your future chapters!

I was recommended this from the author of Sacrifice. This, just from reading this one chapter seems to have a lot in common with Sacrifice, seeing as it's dealing with human error just as Sacrifce does.

I think that I'll definitely like where this is going.

I like all of your new revelations as well as your perceptive on heaven, hell and the war that the two faced. I still like Coba, he's a very interesting character. There was a lot here that was compacted into a relatively short chapter but you did a good job about not making it too jumbled or fast paced.

Lol, it takes me ages to write something and I can never seem to go under 4 thousand words. I admire someone who can wrap up a good chapter within 1 to 2 thousand words.

It's good to see you back and updating. I really enjoy your story. I myself have been gone for a one month hiatus and recently got back to updating myself so I know how it is. I had to work extra hard to post three chapters of my works, type out and post three poems for a couple of friends and type out a friend's chapter of a story for her because she doesn't have the internet. My hands are killing me!

I hope to see another update from you soon!

Hey Nanao.

I've been keeping up with this story even before I joined. Although the night before I read your latest chapter, I had a really weird dream about it. Specifically, Lucifer (or someone like him) had given the Seed Holders (except for Coba) a second chance. It was kinda weird.

haha

this is amazing (:

i love the story plot, and you've written it so well too!

also, i jus have to point out, that you wrote this really well! the chapters, er, or "arcs" is it...? well anyway, they play out very well! the chapters turn out just like an actual anime/manga!

all in all... I loved this.

it's superb :)

update as soon as you can please!

(btw.. i went to your profile, but it seems there is no picture/link to your drawing of hoshi.. -tear-)

I hope you accept fan-art btw (: cuz i love the characters too

TK

I think I'm gonna squeal.

This is the most... I think, one of the most original pieces I've read on this site in a long time.

I really liked how I could picture everything happening in my head, like an anime. Amazingly, I actually read the prologue-I never do, as they're usually terribly boring and unnecessary. But yours was neither.

Nice twist at the end, too. I really want to see where this fic is headed. I'll definitely be back later. _~

Oh another twist in the plot!

Drama!

Keep writting

BOA

Oh my goodness WHAT THE HELL IS THAT? Best cliffhanger EVER. I wish I could say more but I'm a little bit overwhelmed with assignments myself but this makes an excellent short reprieve. Waiting waiting waiting for the next installment and to find out why even Satan would need to be so afraid. And poor Lucifer... I sense he's gonna get himself into more than he imagined, and he hates Bellin already.

I really like Cobra. He's probably my favorite character. Not much to say about this chapter other then you're showing off your characterization skills.

Keep up the good work.

cool.

keep writting

BOA

It's nice to see an update from you again. It's been a while. It also reminds me that I need to update chapter 24 of Sacririce. I've been working like crazy to get caught up on my works but I'm far too tired to type anything tonight so I decided to catch up on my reading.

I only have one more story to review after this one and then I'm off to bed. _ I've had a hard week on the job.

I really like this chapter and it seems that things keep getting more and more interesting. I wonder what the end results will be with everyone.

Seems they are all ever-changing, which makes it all the more interesting for me since I like complexity.

Lovely chapter as always. You never fail to dissapoint.